I Became An Immortal On Mortal Realm

Honestly, I loved this novel so much. An experience worth a lifetime. . . I lived it through this book. I know it may seem like I’m exaggerating, but I truly enjoyed and felt every part of it. The only thing that upset me was the ending—maybe I just wished it had gone on a bit more. Other than that, the story was truly extraordinary. Thank you, author, for such a beautiful book. Even if a lifetime passes, I shall remember it. To others who may see this review I ask u to read this. . . Don't expect everyone interest to be the same Some people like it and some don't But this novel is extraordinary — No questions asked. 8-4-2025

i wrote a 2300 characters in words review, only to click post review and it just said: ERROR. and completly deleted :))))). so i cba to put much effort now into this review. w. e. This novel starts strong, bringing an interesting take on cultivation with solid world progression, fun power moments, and a seemingly fresh approach to the MC’s relationships. However, all of that is completely obliterated by the time-travel nonsense at the end. The author throws away 400 chapters of character development and relationships like they never mattered, erasing everything in favor of a rushed, messy conclusion that reeks of last-minute desperation. While the novel initially tries to avoid clichés, it ultimately falls into every single one—an overpowered MC who always wins, a world that bends to his convenience, and plot points that exist solely to hype him up. Even the so-called deep Dao concepts get reduced to meaningless "fate, karma, destiny" drivel in the last hundred chapters. Worse, so many characters who had amazing potential for schemes and conflicts were utterly abandoned. Side characters with strong buildup? Forgotten. Major relationships? Erased. The entire climax is pointless because none of it actually matters in the end. It’s like the author couldn’t be bothered to finish what he started. smth i cant forgive the author is the sect that he completly abandoned in the start when we start the cultivation journey, there was so many good things with it, and it was left to rot, anyway. If you can stomach investing hundreds of chapters into a story only for it to be completely undone, maybe you’ll enjoy this. Otherwise, don’t waste your time. Final Score: 2/5 – Good start, catastrophic ending.

A shallow read. It was interesting at the beginning, nothing essential, but it presented a cliché and "worked" it in a satisfactory way—without ever doing anything truly good. It's not bad, but it's not good either. A solid 5, completely average. To make things worse, the ending is terrible. From chapter 400 onward, you realize your journey wasn't worth it and that you would have been better off picking another novel.

Good read, would give it a 8/10 but barely. People who don't like big time shenanigans should stay away. Was shorter then most and completed quite nicely even if ending felt a bit rushed. Was somehow unavoidable with MCs secret ability. Action was good, power levels were good. Techniques were interesting even if too many were picked up and trends were chased. Romantic relationship was also fine, I like when its kept on the low end. Side characters were nice even if undeveloped. Cant reach the level of Er Gen but doesn't really try to. Its a shorter compressed adventure. Have fun with it.

it was a good novel , i liked how the story was logical . i would have liked it more if higher level world was introduced and possibly next part of novel was there .

2/5 The ending was a letdown. After he talked with the Descending Dragon Great Saint he just went back in time and instantly became immortal, that was like everything he experienced was nothing but an illusion. I enjoyed reading those adventure.

A Top Grade Junk Food Level Noel Like it Also Is a captivating novel that offers a refreshing take on the cultivation genre. It skillfully blends elements of traditional cultivation tropes with modern humor and a unique protagonist.

cant tell if it was bcs of the translation or if it was just too cliche brainrot cultivation but anyways dont waste your time just typcal "mc is weak. . . he defeats an stronger enemy with power of plot!!!!!!!" theres no personality in it just yapyapyapayapaayaoayaoyaap hate it when the writing and style seems very detailed but just straight up unnecessary nonsense

Solid 4/5, its an enjoyable read and goes into depth on how the dao works (if youre into it you'll like it). It has a really op mc but the world progresses around him very well so theres not a ton of plot holes (there might be some I just havent noticed but I havent come across any). I would have rated the story a 5/5 if not for the ending kinda being rushed. It seemed rushed at the first when you notice its ending but later it looks like the author realized the story would be considered trash with a bad ending and decided to give it effort. Would recommend this read to any cultivation lovers (for them it would be a 5/5).

In the last hundred chapters, everything became fate this fate that karma force etc, but it was still a little bearable . . . but the ending was totally sh*t (like u could feel that author is trying to end this as soon as possible). . . and that timelines and past lives thing, reading one or two novels on that concept was ok but nowadays every novel ends that way. So many novels with rushed and sh*tty endings 🥹🥹 honestly it's kind of sad . Anyway if u don't consider the last 100 or so chapters it's still a pretty good novel ig