Second World

the novel starts out as decent. Then after a while, even though MC was over powered, I thought it was interesting and it became above average. But then the author nerfs MC by subtracting his brain cells and making pointless fights, as well as not writing some game elements correctly, making the novel mediocre. The side characters also aren't interesting for the most part. One of them doesn't talk, another is overly annoying, another is meat-riding MC. I only found 1 side character interesting. And then finally, at the chapter I got to, the author introduces several plot twists all at once, trying to make the plot more dramatic, and therefore, more interesting, but it only came out to be overly dramatic and pretty dumb plot twists. The author completely nerfs the MC, taking away any advantages he had, and makes him stubborn about not killing his enemies. Even when his enemies die, they soon come back, basically unaffected, making all fights pointless. The novel becomes garbage, and no longer entertaining/interesting. Dropped at chapter 320.

For reference, I stopp at around Chpt 1690. I felt my interest in the light novel waning. For starters, it is a well written novel. It had a great starting premise and world building. I enjoyed the MC and how he rose in his abilities and power. However once we got to the Kingdom building aspect, I lost most of interest. Don't get me wrong, I like Kingdom building light novels. If you're interested, read this and Overgeared for example. However the transition from how the story was progressing to kingdom building was too abrupt. I wasn't interested in reading a light novel associated with kingdom building. Then it became a light novel with kingdom building and wars. Lots and lots of wars and kingdom battles. So the first 1000 or so chapters was great. Skip the next 1000 if you're not interested in kingdom building and country wars. Still, it was a great novel for the most part. It was a great ride. I'll return maybe one day and complete the light novel. Always thank the Author. Regardless blood and sweat was poured and it deserves appreciation.

Hi, i had fun reading it. Especially when it stayed at game mechanics. Writer cared so much about balance but screwed it with one Item so one star less and in the end some things he left open that should have been explained like the situation of the royal agents. Still read the most fun parts several times and cant agree with the people WHO think MC ist dumb. I think people are dumb who read many chapters of writing they dont like. . .

This novel is good since i like system based novel and the MC is pretty stupid sometimes but i like the overall story line and how nice it is

still on chapter 456 but so far so good. would still try to finish this and honestly it's just your typical vrmmorpg type of novel. still liked reading it nevertheless

not sure why the review score is so low. I am at chapter 500 and I find this one to be joy to read. Not sure if it's English original or a translation but writing does not detract from the story telling. It's pretty straight forward world turned into game scenario but I've read much worse. So far, very enjoyable. Hopefully this continues. . .

The longer and longer I read the more unstandible it gets. The author tried to give lore, then ruined the whole system with some stiff. It's disappointing because it was pretty strong.

First of all, the battles are filler, you can skip 2-3 chapters of battles and you won't missed anything. Second, the conversation is what you're expecting from newbie writer writing his first novel. Not much depth, just a casual storytelling of 5th grade. Third, the development is boringly slow for a world of VR games. MC's kinda wishy-washy and other characters are embodiment of wuxia novel where moral high ground is a double standar. I feel losing my brain cell after binge read this novel for 80 chapters.

Honestly, it's completely horrible. The only reason I'm giving it two instead of 1 star is that the gaming system and mechanics seemed kinda cool. The conversations and intelligence of every character are retarded. It's like the author has never had a conversation with anyone and then chose to write a novel, or maybe its the translation. Since this novel has a deceivingly high rating, I thought I had to leave this review.

The novel has stupid development. The main character has inconsistent intelligence and inconsistent personality. One moment he would be a Sherlock Holmes investigating crime scenes and the other makes stupid decisions weird proceedings in every negotiating table. One moment he is assertive and dominant about his ideals and the other moment he revokes them on the fly and just chickens out in standoffs. His intelligence is over a thousand but still only getting overpriced prices in all of his haggling against NPC's. It's like reading "1+1=2 oh no 3 no 2. "